Hi bloggers today in literature I have been making informational report about liger's. Liger's are an mix between and lion and a tiger .Please give lot's of feed back feed back and tell me if I got anything wrong.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, May 14, 2021
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Hi max I think you had some really good Information all you need to do is work on your spelling and you'll be all good :)
ReplyDeleteHi Max Archie here I think the introduction was excellent and maybe next time use the spell check because your grammar is 100%.Other then that I think in my honest opinion that it is all good.
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