Would you want and animal that just sit's there and lay's in the sun or would you want to have an dog that will have a lot of fun with you? Go and check out my persuasive writing to see what I think is better.
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, October 1, 2021
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Max, I loved this post. The last slide made me laugh! We will need a bigger house for all the dogs.
ReplyDeleteBelinda Wilson